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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. I would suggest having them do it in dragon form but thats just me. Other than that it's the best AM Drag story I've read so far.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will we be seeing another chapter soon?
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story in very well done don't rush yourself with the post a story like this is worth waiting for if you ask me cant wait to see whats next
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great job on the new chapters. This continues to be a very entertaining story. Haley and Jake are great together. There definitely needs to be more of those two. There is no reason to worry about taking a little time to update, you have been posting almost everyday. Thanks for writing this naughty tale.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for next chapter. You've taken an unusual scenario and made it into a riviting story. Keep up the great story telling and thanks for sharing your talents.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, love your story so far! I like the fact that you have included every day occurences and interactions along with the sex. It makes the story more enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing you talents.
Skeeve
Thanks for sharing you talents.
Skeeve
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow Great! just one word: Amazing story. I love how you make Jake and Haley look like the chosen couple. I'll give you some slack about writing faster. You make like 11 chapters aka 40 pages in like a week. That's actually pretty good. Hell maybe the fastest typer here. Write more please!
Yo Homie, Cat.
Yo Homie, Cat.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another very entertaining chapter. I have never really gotten into ADJL before, but you make Haley and Jake so cute. Mind you I keep imagining the age gap as just a bit smaller, but still very cute. Their close calls were quite funny. That bit in the movie theater was great. I look forward to seeing what you do with this next.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I was laughing so hard at this last chapter, thinking about Haley and Jake kissing and Spud hitting the floor when Jake told him and Trixie "Um.... Funny story, that......".
This is a great story thus far, but I am kinda wondering what Lao Shi and the parentals are going to do if and when they find out about it.
This is a great story thus far, but I am kinda wondering what Lao Shi and the parentals are going to do if and when they find out about it.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the new chapters are great. I really like how swiftly you update. Spud and Trixie were very entertaining. I look forward to your next chapter.