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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
funny story but was good all together
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I normally have a problem with stories of this variety having to much story unless the story is good, and interesting. Your story is all that and more. The take on them makes the characters more interesting on a some what human level. Through out the chapters we were left wondering: Will she truly confess? Will they get found out? Will it all work out? What are the villains planning? All of which you answered fitting the storyline without getting abstract, crazy, or awkwardly. I hope you add more to your sequel.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY NICE!!! i loved it. heres a thought tho...spud trixie haly and jake get to gether and do a 4 some together and mabey trade partners so its jake and trixie and spud and haily and mabey a little bit of haly and trixie. mabey halily by herself while jake is out on a mission using a vibe or sometin. I'd give u ALOT of ideas. contact me if you want.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good. Spud and Trixie's reactions are hilarious.
Man, this is one of those times I wish this show had a more adult rating.
Man, this is one of those times I wish this show had a more adult rating.
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best AM dragon fic out here. I'm hoping part two is just as good, though I still don't understand how the end of chapter 17 happened w/ no lub at all, but, c'eis la vie/
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm all for anouther chapter! I saw at least two more chapters that could be spun off this one.I enjoyed this chapter as much as all the rest, and have been looking foward to seeing anouther one. Thanks for not letting us down.
Skeeve
P.S One thing, you might want to double check your story for errors. I saw a few spelling and grammer errors in the last chapter. I could Beta it for you if you want.
Skeeve
P.S One thing, you might want to double check your story for errors. I saw a few spelling and grammer errors in the last chapter. I could Beta it for you if you want.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story it is really good
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You guys thought this story would never finish? You thought wrong !
Next Chapter......... Coming Soon............
Next Chapter......... Coming Soon............
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i havent finished it yet but its great and i hope ull get a chance to read my stories
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Are they going to do it in their dragon forms?