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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting rape revenge story. As you mentioned, Stella is rather OOC but not terribly so. I actually think Chimera's more OOC than Stella is in this one.
Personally I prefer the characters to express themselves more in dialogue during the course of the story, but that's just me. Overall the story is well written. There are a couple of minor typos that could stand to be swatted, but nothing major. For your first published work I'd say you did very well. Nice job! :)
Personally I prefer the characters to express themselves more in dialogue during the course of the story, but that's just me. Overall the story is well written. There are a couple of minor typos that could stand to be swatted, but nothing major. For your first published work I'd say you did very well. Nice job! :)