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for Take A Chance On Me

by Shwa

person sparkplug the fox
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
CHECK YOUR SPELLING!! Oh my gosh, I enjoy the story but when mad cat turns into dark cat, Mrs. Furlong (chance's mom) turns into Mr. Clawson (jake's dad) you know you have a problem. I beg you, proof read your work before posting it or your gonna throw everyone off kilter (I sure know I'm having some trouble with it) but I'm determind to see tgis to the end!
person Chiky
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOO!!Up date!Loves the babys!^.^So cute!Silly Hard Drive...Trix are for kids!!!For kids damn it!
person Chiky
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I know thats what I wanted but...I almoest cryd when Jake's kitten died!Waaaahaaa!T-TGood job!Not many fanfics can make me cry.Well Done.(bows in your direction)
person Chicky
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon,ok?*.~
person Chiky
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!Pore Jake!We put them thrue so much.Lol!Good job!And your very welcome for the suport.I love this story.Tis the best Ive seen!
person Chiky
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GASP!He's gone into labor!That part made me laph,when Chance said"Let me call my momma'HAHAHA!!!It just tickled my funy bone at the time.Keep it up!Love this story!!!!(i bet you allredy knew that-.-)
person Chiky
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know!Jake's baby dies!GASP!He has a...one of those things when your baby dies before you have it...or somthing.^.^
person Chiky
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!You updated again!I cant tell you how much I love this story.You keep it up!I wanna see the end one day!^.^
person Chiky
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Le snif!Thanks for noticing me!And for continuing the story.I love this one!And your such a good writer it's like your actualy at the cookout!...I dont like Cliff much-.-Jake is my favret so,I bet you know why.Well!Keep up the good work!
person Ckiky
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for continuing!I love this story!So cute,and sad,and sexy all at the same time!You rock!^.^