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by tantecarla

person Leria
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is a DANG funny story! I'm still laughing at the though of Baltor knocking up all three of the witches..... then letting someone else tell them "Oh, you're pregnant!"

Coward of the ETERNITY, definitely!
person Shaellin
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! Something tells me Baltor has had it! =O
person Shaellin
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh sure! Blame this all on me! :D This sounds like it's definitely going to be a fun story! Can't wait for Chapter 2! ^_^

The whole pickles and mayonaise thing with Icy was totally classic! And she didn't even catch on to what it implied! Those girls can be so clueless sometimes. ^,^
person Shaellin
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! Can't wait to see the expression on Baltor's face when he learns he's going to be a proud papa of three kids! =D