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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beyond hot. ;o) I adore your fic's, but I have to say this one has just become my fav! Awesome fic, I have litarily turned into a puddle of goo, from the yummy hotness. (I have lost all corherant brain function, so thats is the best way I can say I love this fic)
Keep up the awesome work. I can wait to read more of this, if there'll be anymore, and/or I look forward to your next fic. (Have you thought about doing an Katara/Ozai fic? ;o)
Keep up the awesome work. I can wait to read more of this, if there'll be anymore, and/or I look forward to your next fic. (Have you thought about doing an Katara/Ozai fic? ;o)
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job describing Zhao fingerfucking Katara. I can totally see it as something he would do. Mmm... rough fingerfucking...
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is proof positive that I don't have to like the content of your stories to like how you write them ^^. I didn't like this one as much as most of yours, but I really like the way you write. I can taste, see, feel all that is going on. Keep up the good work in your writing.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really enjoyed how you wrote about Katara having juicy labia... I enjoy them on women myself.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Absolutely brilliant. Can't wait to see where you are going with this.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww please ! waiting is killing me ! you can't drop it all and let us alone just when you make it hot !
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it so much!!! can't wait to read more of this story! keep up the great work, time, and effort that you are putting into this sweet story!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter if you please...
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Yo Momma and continue
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why did you have to leave it there? This is so good. I give you a TEN out of 5 stars! :)