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for Desire

by AloofandAndrogynous

person BCStorm
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've always enjoy your work =D
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank fucking God that you updated.
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Again great use of vocab and discription. I really liked this but I feel like a fourth instalment would help finish this off seeing all the build up you gave it. Maybe years later after she had escaped and as a faint memory. You wouldn't really have to go into detail but it would be nice to see poor Katara have a happy ending. Or at least have her son/daughter kill him would be good too. I really love your work.
person Spleef
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delish.
person Bee
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!! Seriously I can`t wait to see what Zhao has planned for Katara.....Will he kill Azula and have Katara at his side...will Katara get pregnant....Will he get jealous if anyone else pays attention to Katara because he seemed pretty serious when he said has his...though Katara has a fighting spirit that won`t make it easy for him.
LOVE THIS STORY!! Update soon.
person crazytail
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you updating this. This chapter was great as always. What will Azula do when she finds out about this? I will tune in to read.
person Lillybugs
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am starting to get warmed to the Zhao and Katara pairing. This helps alot!! Please continue.
person Mecks
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zhao wasn't as bad as I thought he would be... but he was still very in character. I'm glad to see a story where he isn't some brutal ass.
person Khale
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story of yours I am so happy you started to update it more. Keep going.
person Gin
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent work. Zhao reminding her at the end just who the boss was... felt very incharacter to me.