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for Mind Fuck

by beeftony

person greenzxr
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ the last four lines.
person skoshi4
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I stand squicked. Good story. I'm going to read Kothoga's tale for a comparison.
person Kothoga
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story mate....and I don't mind, I will try to remember to write as close as what the characters in show would do and react in the next story..

person Leria
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great story! Set up perfectly for a sequel where Ron realizes Kim got Bonnie pregnant and Kim realizes SHE'S pregnant!