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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We need more Zutara... Please? Update soon!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ozai is still alive and plotting the death of his son. I LOVED the segment how Zuko became the dragon Prince that was AWESOME. This entire story is AWESOME. MORE and MORE PLEASE!!!!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Mr. Papers you did not disappoint. I have been waiting hoping you would update. This is excellent. Love the change up to the Palace and some of the background with his evil father who will cause the greatest of problems. is going to MURDER someone. Do you hear me? Well written chapter I say continue but it is up to you.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was freakin' fanstatic.
I love Action and this is action packed with romance and stuff. I am yours!!!
I love Action and this is action packed with romance and stuff. I am yours!!!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story because it is so well crafted. I mean I am just chomping at the bit wondering when you are going to update. Background was AWESOME. I loved that action. I see trouble ahead and I wonder if Katara will prove his only weakness. This story has no equal for me. Continue!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. he is really fierce when it comes to loyalty and the his father will spend the rest of what little life he has left trying to kill him. I love this dark Dragon Prince. I want more and will be waiting for your next update.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was SWEET and AWESOME. I love the way you write and this story is going to be a classic in my book. Keep updating PLEASE more Zutara!!!!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice 2 c that ozai got what he deserved. im sooo happy 2 know that sokka is still alive. i wonder how he will take it when he finds out that zuko is in love w/ katara? under the events that happened i doubt very well.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLease say that you are writing the secomd chapter now. This is very gripping ,action packed and DARK! just like I like it.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so well done I want to see MORE of it right now. Trully awesome beginning. Loved it. Now, get to writing!