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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I demand more. I love the flow and feel of this. I am interested to see what his world is like and if Katara will blend into it. She is his soulmate. Fanstatic stuff.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Like it. Very different and very good. Would very much love to read more.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I need to know how many more FABULOUS stories are you going to write because I need to get my reading schedule in order. Dude AWESOME. I love it already and it is only the first chapter. I love the feel of it. love it. Update Voracious NOW!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes it is a reader. I wish for more and then more after that. Great story and writing.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! Cant' wait to see what happens!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Cant wait to see more, I hope you update soon!!!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In love with it got to have it. AWESOME It is Walkingpapers day!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spaghetti and jelly Damn this is good! Love it more!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes... very good. Well written. Pretty dramatic and fabelistic... I can't wait to hear more about their psych and history. As long as you support your strong characters with some psychological depth and give Katara enough of an "umph" this will be an awesome story.
Very original!
Good job!!
Very original!
Good job!!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was certainly action packed...fast paced and a attention grabber..next update?