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for The Conqueror

by AdamIam

person Zutarian
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it... Nice idea for a story. You should contiue- Kudos!
person INC
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lIKE IT! Update today or within the next hour?
person Bee
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. I can't wait to see how Katara will react when she finds out she belongs to the prince. If it's the same independant Katara that we know and love, I think she is not going to like that! I love how you describe the Prince, he is very very dark...love it.
person Coreena
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! This story is well constructed and written. Marvelous Marvelous. There must be more of it I beg of you!
person wydow
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What artistry you have. I can picture everything that you have written about. Awesome job. I think this it is beautiful they way you have started this masterpiece. CONTINUE!
person evoD
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Versatility is a rare gift and you have it in both of your stories. I love your stories. More please
person ToriIt
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue, please! The story itself is one to behold.
person Tori
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tori, sorry bout that, now as I was saying this story is one to behold, I like this new idea, dragon prince zuko, this is great continue it ok. I want to see more of plot and the unfolding of each indavisiual unfold futher. And I'd like to see more from you as an author, I'm curious to see you unfold.
person Panther Eyes
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning. is the fire nation the good guys since they helped the south pole defeat the north pole n saved katara? zuko is instantly attrached 2 katara but she fears him. is he going 2 try 2 make her love him? i would like 2 read more.
person RedWine
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
King Arthur type feel with all the sexiness you love. I think this is Awesome. What did we have for dinner this time. Keep having it. FAB