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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how am i suppose to read other stories with this one on the board.
THIS IS SPECTACULAR DUDE!
you make me want to join so you can notify me when you update because I do not read here often.
MORE!
THIS IS SPECTACULAR DUDE!
you make me want to join so you can notify me when you update because I do not read here often.
MORE!
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting for the rest of it. That opening chapter was gripping and awesome. Keep it flowing this has the making of an Awesome story
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning, I can tell you that I will be in love with the darkness and mystery of Zuko. More on the history and what Katara is going to think when she finds out she is his. Awesome
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job, i like it, keep going.
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Powerful, Exciting, and Addictive writing...I want more
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Some of the most amazing writing I have ever read...Bravo
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning. Will anyone else from the show be appearing throughout this? I'm thinking Iroh's a sure bet, but what of Aang, or Toph? I'm also guessing that Sokka is an immediate write off, unless he comes in as a cousin or something. Well, laters.
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh mw what a great beginning and story. This has the potentail to be trully awesome. I already what to print it our and read it at work. Continue please
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is AMAZING!! I already love itt way too much. Well written with everything a epic and beautiful story needs. GO on my good man
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fresh and thrilling piece of work. Well written ,dramatic and periodic. I love it and cannot wait to read more. Fanstatic job!