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This was so fantastic... pity it's so far back in the archive that I'm just now getting to it. Beautiful style, and unique format. Only thing that would've made this better would have been a little follow-up on Don and Mike, or some resolution where all four of them get together... eh, wishful thinking on my part. But bravo... this is one of my favorite fics now.

Must stop by to say that I loved the first chapter!
Really extremely good text and the concept definitely thrills me.
Now off to read to rest.

I thought this story was amazing. It was the first TMNT story I have ever read, and I because of this, I don't think it will be my last. I do have one little thought on it though that made me a little sad. I was a little troubled that you did not include a story for Don and Mickey, although I figured that you didn't want them to have one at the end, I figured it was your idea for them not to hook up anyway. Oh well. Good story and thanks for the good read. Love the long chapters.

-D.D.Darkwriter

First, i really have to say that you pulled this very well. I usually dont see how cartoon characters, especially american cartoons (since anime/ vidgame guys are too hot not to write about them lol), can have parings that i would actually find interesting and well hot lol. But, this was really good despite the fact that it was a show i used to watch when i was younger hehe, although i havr to say, even at a young age, when i saw the first movie, i thought that they seemed a lil bit more then just ..brothers hehe :P. Anyways, I really liked that you explored each one of their personalities, while at the same time, you let the story continue, instead of going back to the same situation/scene just to show what the others thought at the same time. I thought this worked better. I think you got their personalites perfect as well. This is my favorite fic w/ the guys, so if you ever have a new idea, especially with Donny and Raph hehe (who are my favorite pairing :P)please share it on here. ^_^ Your fan, SpaceToy. ^_^

This was such an awesome fic, in both the writing, emotions, and the fact that I'm not the only person who saw beyond brotherly love when watching TMNT!! Thanks so much! ~herme

ok that was awesome! I've soooo been looking for something like this! Wonderful wonderful job! I can't wait for the next part!

I'm so glad I found your story and it's second chapter! I love Mikey's response to the whole situation; his torn emotions are great. Thanks so much!