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for The Parasol of Prettiness

by radatrix

person i like wontons
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was the funniest thing I ever read... wonton... that's FUNNY!!
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I--Oh god, I haven't laughed this hard in forever. Continue the madness, if you would be so kind.
person Kachie-Chan
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know this is supposed to be a parody kinda thing... but I still don't like the characters cussing. XD

But you're right though. You basically got everything that is in a cliche XS fic, ESPECIALLY the 'repeat scenario' and the 'OVERLY mama's boy' Jack. You're right on the money with the undetailed descriptions too!

XDD That made me laugh so hard. Good job.