rate_review Reviews

Excellent.

Its good so far, keep going!

This story has an interesting start. The "what if" idea has a firm foundation in todays fiction, and is one that I like to pursue myself in my musings. It will be interesting to see where you take this story. Will this be exclusively an erotic story or will you explore the ramification of the prince's decisions for the future?
Honestly if you want to see this story become more widely reviewed you might want to expand on the characters a little more.
Good luck with the rest of the story, I look forward to seeing where you take it.