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for Slave of Egypt

by Nathalia

person sarivka
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. please, continue!
person Cyerena
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, if the Christian God exists, I'm going to hell.

I really did enjoy the story. It's pretty well written and I'd like to see more.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice use of the english language properly....something that others on this site for some reason cannot grasp. 5/5 (perfect story..but would like to see longer chapters.
person Tahn
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, can't wait for the rest. Wish he wouldn't be so rough but I guess that's what he's supposed to do in this story.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always wondered what would happen if she got caught. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Reih
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very sexy story. It's also very dark and forbidding. I think that we were all wondering what would/could have happened if she hadn't gotten away that night. Good job! ^^
person vera
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, so iknow this is rather late, but i just read the story. it's interesting. pleez continue!
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story are you going to finish it.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting AU, please add more soon
person John
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, very descriptive and well written, I look forward to see how the slave girl escapes...if she does...