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Hot stuff though I would apprecitae more detail in the sex scenes.  Hoping for Miriam action though I'm not really into threesomes with two guys...

there's not enough prince of egypt adult fic that isn't rameses/moses PLEASE keep this going!! bringing miriam into it just made things a lot more interesting.

it's a shame you haven't finished this story I really enjoyed it before I clicked on it I knew it was unfinished so I wasn't going to even bother reading it but I couldn't help myself I usually don't read unfinished work all the stories I've been reading for the past couple years are already complete I don't like reading uncomplete work cuz all I do is torture myself by doing so and constantly wondering what if and what will happen next or is this offer will ever finish it I hope you consider finishing this story because the Prince of Egypt fan fictions are very hard to come by so don't let this go to waste please

i love this story, i would like to see what else comes as well as see her sisters brought into it. i'm so evil for even thinking it, but i think it would add a dinamic to Moses control.

Good use of details and the emotion you wrote was very realistic, I think the only thing I could suggest is that you use more description in the actual sex scenes, draw it out a little more. Other than that I loved it!

great so far, can't wait to see how it progresses, please update soon

Sexy. Could use more details during the sex. It's great to read though because I imagined this scene myself when watching the movie! Keep writing.
SailorNemesis

wow this is pretty heavy. short sweet and to the point

its hot! but i kind of want her to be into it too, ya know?

Not bad
I always wondered what he would do to her if he chose to not let her go free
I like how you worked the BDSM in there
I always get off on that