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person bloodrain01
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate u. chapter 1 and 2 are realy good then the dame cliff!! write more love it
person Kothoga
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work on the 2nd chapter mate...I will be waiting for the next chapter, must see what Bonnie has to tell Kimmie :D
person golddrake
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, can't wait for more
person Darken.Naruto
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story it seems like something that could happen but who knows hope to see an update for this story I love it and why did Kim's parents put a camera in her room...
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic and Ron gets to live out most guys fantasy.
person warprince2099
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. A continuation would be good.
person Kothoga
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story mate...I'm defiantly gonna wait for more of your work