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That was great! Don't stop anytime soon.

I love your story so far and I can't wait for more. So...PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! I bet that the person with binoculors was Yori Ron's friend from the ninja school. But anyway keep up the great work, and hopefully frequent writing.

nice work on the 3rd chapter mate...can't wait for the next one

got me whating more so get the rest out of ur head on start typing

Good chapter here... I guess the contact by Bonnie's kick must have snapped his neck... I would be scared crazy as well... Can't wait to see what happens next. Good story so far.. keep it up...

You know, this is a rare thing here, finding a story on this site with a definite plot and characterization that feels right. Granted, I can't really see the characters actually getting into a relationship like this, but you have brought the characters natural quirks into the story quite nicely, and that makes it a great read.

Oh, and we must definitely have a confrontation between Bonnie and Tara at some point, because I just have to see that. A sorrowful Tara who didn't realize what she had lost until it was too late would be perfect, though any which way would be fine by me, so long as we see something.

Eagerly awaiting more!

freaken sweet! Kim and Shego, and they are with ron, but i give it up for the ron man.

Nice update and even though it isn't as long it still is a great read. Hope you keep up with this story it is one of the best one yet and please update soon

That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)

That was a very strong scene