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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome 5th chapter mate...I especially loved the ending on the chapter :D
Monique as Ron's birthday present...he must be one lucky Son of bitch :D
Hope to read more of your work soon
Monique as Ron's birthday present...he must be one lucky Son of bitch :D
Hope to read more of your work soon
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A little bloodthirsty, but who am I to complain. If you've read my series, you'd see I've done almost as bad. lol
I have to say again, it is so refreshing to actually read a story here with an actual plot. Even I would have to say I'm guilty of that a bit, since I put most of my plot stories on FF.net. It gives such a better sense of completeness to have story to back things up with.
The action was intense, and easy to visualize. Hope to see much more like this in the future!
Eagerly awaiting more!
I have to say again, it is so refreshing to actually read a story here with an actual plot. Even I would have to say I'm guilty of that a bit, since I put most of my plot stories on FF.net. It gives such a better sense of completeness to have story to back things up with.
The action was intense, and easy to visualize. Hope to see much more like this in the future!
Eagerly awaiting more!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, can't wait to see what you write next.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the story and the plot that is going with it.. You could make this longer than make a sequel or keep cranking a chapter out for now then make your decision of what to do next
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Really good stuff. Keep up the amazing work.
Oh, and regarding whether you should continue the story in a new entry or add chapters to this one, I'd say just add to this series. One reason being I often to go back and re-read old chapters and I like having it all together.
Again, great series. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh, and regarding whether you should continue the story in a new entry or add chapters to this one, I'd say just add to this series. One reason being I often to go back and re-read old chapters and I like having it all together.
Again, great series. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story but I just want you to know in the cartoon Yuri breast are bigger than kim's in fact kim's the smallest in the show, makes her seem real by not making her totally perfect.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I normally don't read Kim Possible fics...but after watching one of the newer episodes *after the movie where Ron and Kim finally hook up*, I decided to check out some fics. I noticed this one and it caught my interest and I have to say this was awesome!! You kept the characters basically in character. Ron was a bit off but hey, he's my favorite guy!! Hehe, sooo I loved how you made him a bit more mature ^_^. He is sooo loveable....ok I'm getting ahead of myself ^^; Anyway, I loved what you are doing with this story. I will totally keep an eye out on this and wait for more of your chapters to come out! I love the girl/girl love in this, not to much of that out there, and Ron has to be the LUCKIEST guy right now hahaha. I completely enjoyed this story and can't wait to read more from you!!! Two thumbs up! ^_^. Later!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope all or one of them ends up pregnantit'll add somuch drama!keep writing just love it
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome work on the 4th chapter mate...and I like how you write the chapters...not so much sex at the beginning and something important or an importment event and then at the end some steaming hot sex session.
Keep up the good work mate and I hope you will give some more Anal scenes to Ron now that he have 4 ladies to attend to (He must get a lot of training to keep going having 4 ladies to take care of :D )...any possible working on Monique or any other female in Ron's harem (I call it a harem, don't know what you call it but)?
Either way...Can't wait for the 5th chapter now :D
Keep up the good work mate and I hope you will give some more Anal scenes to Ron now that he have 4 ladies to attend to (He must get a lot of training to keep going having 4 ladies to take care of :D )...any possible working on Monique or any other female in Ron's harem (I call it a harem, don't know what you call it but)?
Either way...Can't wait for the 5th chapter now :D
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"This is Hana Stoppable; your new baby sister."
"Woah!" Ron said, falling back into his seat. "I know I haven't called in a while, but I didn't think it was that long ago!"
Man, I just loved this line. I'm not sure why, maybe it's the fever still hanging in there, but I just couldn't stop laughing, picturing Ron's expression.
"A thousand, eh?" Mr. Possible asked. "And here I thought the guy was supposed to be wise."
And then I read this line and the giggles keep flowing. lol
And you were right, not the Tara development I was expecting, that's for sure. Gonna be interesting to see how the normally sweet and innocent Tara gets her payback.
Eagerly awaiting more!
"Woah!" Ron said, falling back into his seat. "I know I haven't called in a while, but I didn't think it was that long ago!"
Man, I just loved this line. I'm not sure why, maybe it's the fever still hanging in there, but I just couldn't stop laughing, picturing Ron's expression.
"A thousand, eh?" Mr. Possible asked. "And here I thought the guy was supposed to be wise."
And then I read this line and the giggles keep flowing. lol
And you were right, not the Tara development I was expecting, that's for sure. Gonna be interesting to see how the normally sweet and innocent Tara gets her payback.
Eagerly awaiting more!