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Ah, so the Shredder turned Kim and Shego into mutants..... I can understand why Ron is a little broken up about that, mutations are semi-permanent.

Nice one dude! Keep 'em coming.

WOW...

What a awesome, sweet way to end the arc. 10 out of 5!

I totally get what your talking about with the subject of Tara losing her arm. I guess I've just been watching to much cheesy TV. :)
Oh, and about the Ryu thing. I'm just familiar enough with Street Fighter and Dragonball to get them mixed up. :s

Can't wait for the next one!

P.S. Lighthawk and Starmaster40, if your comment about Ron being made to look like a bad cook was referring to the oatmeal part, I believe you are mistaken. It was referring to Kim making it so badly that they had to cut it with a knife. Haha!

Please update this story soon. I hope you put in a chapter with Kim and Ron's wedding. Will you have a chapter of Kim getting prwegnant?

awesome chapter :D Although it didn't contain so much sex as the previous one it was well written
although I wished would have some dictionary or something that tells what Yori says when she say something in japanease (I hope it's japanese because I don't know how to tell the different between chinese and japanese)..

Oh well...Hope to see your next work up soon :D

I mad at you, can you imagine how I feel when I know that on the show the only thing Ron can do without messing up is cooking and you up and take that from him, then you give kim cooking skills and bigger breast are you evil, you could't let her have some faults also I'm 50/50 on the lotus blade thing I not sure I would be comfortable depending on Ron to be a hero even though I like the guy.

Your story is a very good read. It is not just the sex in it, but the plot in whole. This was a very goood Start to your series. The only problem I have had is in chapter 6 you implied that ron is not a good cook when in fact he is a fantastic one. Other than that which you might have changed to fit your univers, all in all it is excellent. I can not wait for the nexy arc.

I hope to read more of your story soon

(On chapter 5)

Another masterful installment! I really love the Bonnie & Yori coupling and the Ryu reference made me grin. One small bit of criticism though: When Tara got her arm chopped, I would have liked her to have been... I don't know... Possibly a bit more jarred by it (she didn't seem to even feel the pain)?

Other than that it was amazing.

Keep up the good work!

This has to be one of the best Kim possible Fan Fics I have ever read. I love the time you put in to create a plausible scenario that brought all of these characters together. I especially like how you were able to do this without using sex exclusively as the connecting bonds. I also appreciated the way you separated the idea of "love" and sex as being one and the other. To many people have the idea that love and sex are just two words with the same meaning.
The fight scene was a little bit of a let down for me. While the action was great, I thought there could have been a little more suspense to it.
But over all I have to say this is a great story.