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I'm now a fan of this story.

It has action,drama,romance and amazing sexual writing.

I just want to thank you for this story. I really like it and would just like to say that the Kim Possible that I am writing also has places where I used the lyrics for "Say The Word." I swear to God that I had this written before I read your story. Thank you.

Awesome!!And this is just the first chapter.

I'm going read it one chapter by day.It will make more excited to me.

She sighed. "But I admit this is strange; it's almost like I'm a character in someone's twisted romance fantasy."

Ron laughed. "Oh, come on, KP! What are the odds of that?"

"I guess you're right, Ron. That is a pretty silly idea."


Ok that was funny, good story, well written and enjoyable. Good job

J.F.C. talk about your twists and turns, of all the A.F.F. i've read this one is the creme de la creme of all i've read so far. Bravo, Bravo. Was really worried though, thinking that Dr D. was going to be invited into the Delta forces bedroom. OOOh, wrong sick. However, what you did with Drakken was the most incredible plot twist, and was the most engaging love scene of the whole story line. Tears come easly to me when I read love stories where someone dies unnessarily. All that aside though, thank you for continueing in the updates, and see you on the next page.

Kisses from Vina

Hey, just read the whole set been up all night and most of the day but its awesome. Kinda questioned the TMNT but it turned out really well. I love this keep it up is you need anything whatsoever please do not hesitate to let me know. And on a side not, I found so few errors it was amazing. Well done, my friend well done. BTW I'm either Darkwitchkazzi or Witchwithfangs on here can't remember which. I love the plot by the way you should consider becoming an author. Well written, good plot, fun jokes, unique tastes. Well have fun.

My Lady Kazzia

Hey, just have to say that your stories are very interesting. And oddly enough what you have said about the use of skin cells to create embryos may become a possibility with the discovery that stem cells can be created from skin cells instead of only from embryos. Perhaps it will solve the problems facing lesbian couples.

I am Stunned. You are damn good. Hope you bring in the Street Fighter idea some day.

Ok was not expecting to see Unicron's name in a Kim Possible story. And that was a noble act for Drakken to go out with. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.

The story is good, but I am really not digging the 'kill the bad guys' bullshit. No, they should be brought into a police station and imprisoned, NOT killed. That makes the people in this story WORSE than the bad guys they are fighting against, because they are supposed to be the good guys.
Re-write the story, leaving out all the killing, and you might get a few more reviews and a few more people who like your story.