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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a very nice story.. this has lotsa potential. You build it up quite nicely and i like the ty lee response thingie.. its fun :).. if you keep this up this is going to be one of the best stories here.. so keep up the good work(no pun intended.. or did I?)
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well yeah i've been looking for mai/sokka fics and threesomes are hot... so this is perfect
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, new to this fanfic business, yours happened to be the first I've ever read. Yea, thanks a lot. Now i can't read anyone elses cuz they suck in comparison. Your fanfic is the most realistic, in character, and the best written smut I've ever read. Wow. This is what the creators would have written if they needed to write porn. PLEASE, hurry up with Stranded (Nice combo, by the way.) Keep up your great work.
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love the sokka/Ty lee pairing, and Mai only adds to the fun. and good job keepin the characters personalities intact. more please!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice one, nice concept the 3 some with sokka, nice job update soon pls
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, for a plotless sex story. At least you're getting the grammar and spelling right, and nobody seems terribly OOC yet. More thoughts once the action starts up.
PS: thanks for allowing unregistered reviews. Not everybody likes attaching themselves with some sort of permanency to these sort of sites.
PS: thanks for allowing unregistered reviews. Not everybody likes attaching themselves with some sort of permanency to these sort of sites.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Happy mouth"!
That's adorable. I want to pinch her cheeks until I hear a tooth pop.
That's adorable. I want to pinch her cheeks until I hear a tooth pop.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Threesomes are hot and I can't wait for this one.