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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A decent, but unassuming plotless titillating piece of (currently) Pseudo-Smut.
That was my thinking until the "Sokka makes fire" sentence.
Now I can't wait for future chapters. What is it about a good dirty innuendo that makes EVERYTHING better, huh? Damn.
Joking aside, I like your style of writing. It is very easy to get into. The fact that you actually lead into the boinking (instead of instigating it withing a few sentences or paragraphs) makes your stories more appealing to me.
That was my thinking until the "Sokka makes fire" sentence.
Now I can't wait for future chapters. What is it about a good dirty innuendo that makes EVERYTHING better, huh? Damn.
Joking aside, I like your style of writing. It is very easy to get into. The fact that you actually lead into the boinking (instead of instigating it withing a few sentences or paragraphs) makes your stories more appealing to me.
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. go on
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I love threesomes and this one makes as much sense as one can. Keep going.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the story it was descent but dude what i want to know is how can you go from
440 two days ago when I read it to almost getting 1000 hits. i do not think that is
possible. How do you continue to receive 20 to 40 hits while everyone else scraps by.
Hey i am not saying something is wrong here I just want to know why.
440 two days ago when I read it to almost getting 1000 hits. i do not think that is
possible. How do you continue to receive 20 to 40 hits while everyone else scraps by.
Hey i am not saying something is wrong here I just want to know why.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo just letting u know,i know where u live and im coming to your house with a hatchet if u dont hurry up and update this dam story :>
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another amazing story. I am eager to see more of this, the threesome idea is brillant. I do not know why I kept putting off reviewing this, but I had to come and say i really love this story. I hope you will continue In Bai Shan as well. Your story Feel It was the first Avatar fanfiction I ever read, and I still have not found anyone that can equal the quality of your work. Thank you for producing another appealing and unusual tale for us to enjoy.
Nafien
Nafien
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story keep up the great work!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see more! Can Tylee send me a shout next chapter? I love her! Oh one more thing whens it gonna get hot?! Keep up the good work!
Chigirl
Chigirl
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more i love it im hanging on every word here
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great first chapter. =D Though I am a little disappointed to see Ty Lee in the story. I just think with Mai and Sokka attitudes towards things that the would be more compatible. And speaking of attitudes, I thought Mai was a little to passionate in this. I think at some point she would have just shrugged and been like, "Whatever."
Anyway, I can already see that this will be one of the stories I'll be addicted too. I'm off to chapter two!
EEG
Anyway, I can already see that this will be one of the stories I'll be addicted too. I'm off to chapter two!
EEG