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We do not have an account here but we do read alot of stories here in this fandom. Something about your stories is puzzling to us. We find that your stories have an exceedingly amount of hits that we do not think are reader generated.

We do not know if you are writing and giving your stories hits to show that they are the most popular or what. As a result of what we think is happening,we have decided not to read anymore of your stories past , present, or future.

Z-group

So far the only avatar fic I look forward to *thumbs up* cant wait to see chap 5

Well, you did mention that having more reviews makes the work go faster, so here you go. I like the story. A lot. So write faster (please?). I'm very fond of the Sokka/Ty Lee pairing, and a big fan of Mai, though I never imagined a threesome between them would work out so well. The thought just never crossed my mind, so I commend you on coming up with it. Also, like others have said, this story is very well-written, reasonably true to the characters (as true as can be in a sex story), and extremely hot. Bravo.

Finally: Ty Lee, if you answer this, I'd just like you to know I think you're adorable, and would like to give you a hug.
Sokka, if you answer this, you're my hero. It does seem, though, that you aren't using as much sarcasm as usual (probably because you're still getting comfy with the girls) and I miss it.
Mai, if you answer this, I admire your tranquil, reserved nature (I can relate) but I'm glad to see you come out of your shell a little.

I wondered how you would bring Mai into the threesome, and now I realize how you built things up. Mai has obviosuly been badly hurt in the past, she's scared and confused by being stranded (well illustrated by her inhability to find her own food), and I suspect she suffers from bipolar syndrome. It is thus believable that once she overcame her fears she would welcome some comforting, and Sokka's treatment of her has shown her that not all men are out to take advantage of her. The thing I like most about your work is that it's not about pure lust but that feelings are an important part of the story. Tell Sokka I said 'Hi' ;)

Okay, now this is getting really hot. I loved Sokka and Ty Lee, but now adding Mai in really makes it steamy. I eagerly await the next chapter. I love your style of writing, you provide an excellent description of the scene, making it easy to visualize. You teaser about the finale and the surprise have me wondering what you could be up to. Great job, I look forward to seeing more of your stories.

If one thing stands out above the rest, it's the plot and characterization (Okay, so that's two things - whatever, no time to backspace!). I'm totally getting into the whole stranded on an island with a laconic psycho and a playful nymph idea; and it's only sweetened by the promise of both being involved in a sexy romp with the male protagonist (at the same time...! YAY threesomes!!). And believable characterization is ALWAYS a plus and very much appreciated on my end. I haven't ONCE rolled my eyes reading the dialogue, and I consider myself rather critical of that sort of thing. Maybe it's because those two haven't had time in the show to fully develop character-wise, or maybe you just make perfect use of what they've given you thus far, but I do know for sure that I like what I read, and that's all that matters! :)... <- See, critical of even compliments I give you.

Anyway, kudos on a good story. Just wanted to say so before I had to haul ass somewhere. Keep it up so the rest of us can keep it up (or moist - I ain't sexist ladies :P).

Oh, that reminds me. I do have one little gripe about the latest chapter; and that's the clutter. Good dialogue, character, and scenery, but it all feels accelerated without much build up. Pacing my friend.

(...Continued from above bc AFF apparently thinks I'm too long-winded 0.o')

Anyway, kudos on a good story. Just wanted to say so before I had to haul ass somewhere. Keep it up so the rest of us can keep it up (or moist - I ain't sexist ladies :P).

Oh, that reminds me. I do have one little gripe about the latest chapter; and that's the clutter. Good dialogue, character, and scenery, but it all feels accelerated without much build up. Pacing my friend.

Once again you balance well erotism, graphic depictions and storytelling. And I love how you depict Ty Lee, cute but able to take care of herself, and more to her than meets the eye. I love Ty Lee, my little cutie with braid. You're also doing a great job with Sokka; I've seen like 6 episodes of Avatar right now, but Sokka is my fav male character and as far as I'm concerned you're dead on with his personality.
Diego

For the love of God, update the story!