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by Duae

person Sasha Marie
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely, very beautifully written.
person Kya
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh mmmm...That was hot! Very nice ^_^
person Penname wa Silver B
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo hooooott.
person Wicabeth
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* That was yummy
person Shadows Run
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The prose is very tight and I like the words you used, maelstrom and such. And Dib's conflicted desires, how you phrased that was good. I was really happy at the end when they were just pretending, I felt better about the entire scene since there wasn't a danger of real violence, but at the same time, while I was reading it, the threat of something bad happening made it better. Yay! And any scene ending in a cuddle with promises of more is amazing.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, you just uploaded this yesterday? I'm so happy I caught it early XD;; This is awesome. Write more. NOW.

I enjoy how in-character Zim is. And I also enjoy the fact that they are already in an established relationship. Simply happy smut. The best kind!
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting and well written. i liked it