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August 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM
hey can I be in the story
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stuff so much! You're my favorite writer here, and it's shame you haven't done anything in such a long time.
Like a lot of people this isn't my thing (at all), but you wrote it so well that I couldn't help but get turned on. The only criticism I have is the part where Aang didn't seem to know what an erection was. I don't care how old he is in this, but a boy would have to be pretty oblivious to have never noticed getting hard before. Erections happen as early as BEFORE BIRTH. The age when you finally understand WHY you're getting hard is what varies from age to age, not when you get the erection itself. That might have been what Aang was asking about, but it came off as him never having experienced an erection in his life before that point...which is impossible. lol
Sorry for the rant. I just get a little annoyed because I see that kind of thing pop up a lot. And it's hard to find anything negative to say about your stories because they're all so awesome. XD
Like a lot of people this isn't my thing (at all), but you wrote it so well that I couldn't help but get turned on. The only criticism I have is the part where Aang didn't seem to know what an erection was. I don't care how old he is in this, but a boy would have to be pretty oblivious to have never noticed getting hard before. Erections happen as early as BEFORE BIRTH. The age when you finally understand WHY you're getting hard is what varies from age to age, not when you get the erection itself. That might have been what Aang was asking about, but it came off as him never having experienced an erection in his life before that point...which is impossible. lol
Sorry for the rant. I just get a little annoyed because I see that kind of thing pop up a lot. And it's hard to find anything negative to say about your stories because they're all so awesome. XD
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. It was written very beautifully.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very touching, refreshingly sweet. I enjoyed it in full and would not be disappointed in seeing a second chapter.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I admit I was hesitant, but this turned out much better than I expected! Your probobly the only writer talented enoughto pull it off so well..!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I'd like the pairing, at first, but I found it incredibly...sweet, towards the end. <3 Well written, too. Bravo.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god... this is so very wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong :). You take crack to a new level ;). Shouta is not my thing, personally, but like everything else you write, this one is very well written. I just can't help but get past the image of Gyasto as a dirty old pedo... ;)
Now to check out your Iroh/Zuko fic, because I just can't help but to look. :)
Now to check out your Iroh/Zuko fic, because I just can't help but to look. :)
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I could enjot Shota so much...
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was very sweet and well-written, and I could see this happening. Gyatso's treatment of Aang and the boy's reactions were handled and written well. Very much like the Iroh/Zuko story you wrote.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! it IS the hawt smex that yaoi fans love. so gentle, loving, and hawt~