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November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this
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December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Please continue.
Kat
Kat
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I almost forgot this story, it's gotten so good and your writing has improved may i say! I cant wait to read more really! haha zuko is gonna give sokka a hard time isnt he? and i totally am loving your portrayal of aang, it's one of a kind!
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better with every chapter. your writing skills improve each time you update. I can see that you have worked hard at improving your writing. I love this story. You are an amazing writer with awesome abilities.
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely worth every minute i had to wait for you to update. I love theflow and the rhythm of your writing. It is excellent. You have come a very long way from the beginning of your story. You are a beautiful storyteller so please do not deprive us of your marvelous talent and ability. ~Coreena~
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October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Long awaited but Just spectacular as the rest.
I have to say that your writing ability has progressed so well. I sometimes reread this story just amazed at how well you have progressed from the first chapter until now. This story is so well done. You are an awesome storteller. I know that is said to you alot but it is true. This story is so addictive there is no way you could have planned this. It is all due to your wanting to improve your skill or talent at writing. you have done that in a masterful way. Keep going and never stop FAB
I have to say that your writing ability has progressed so well. I sometimes reread this story just amazed at how well you have progressed from the first chapter until now. This story is so well done. You are an awesome storteller. I know that is said to you alot but it is true. This story is so addictive there is no way you could have planned this. It is all due to your wanting to improve your skill or talent at writing. you have done that in a masterful way. Keep going and never stop FAB
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am overjoyed with your return to writing. I also want to say how much I love this WELL EXECUTED piece of work you have created. It is so addictive and stunning. I absolutely hope you give it its proper worthiness by completing it. Walkingpapers
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter--why must Zuko and Katara get interupted so? Glad you're still continuing thus!
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As always you never disappoint. I love this story and I hope you complete it because it is just too Extraordinary to leave vacant.
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Things have not exactly improved, but at least Sokka's off of Azula, if only for the moment. And it seems Zuko knows about Aang's visit after all, huh? Well, here's hoping Sokka gets out of that room intact, and that nothing too bad happens to him( and that Xin doesn't make it to the rebel camp alive, hehehe...). Until chapter 15, then. Laters.