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for It all comes in three

by tantecarla

person Shaellin
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just got around to reading The Trail We Blaze part 3. Hadn't even realized it was up! Funny that I got to beta read Wall of Ice first. Nice job with both chapters. :)
person Shaellin
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, nifty! I love the whole Guardian Sphinx thing and seeing Icy and Stormy struggle to solve its riddle. The way Icy finally solved it felt like it was right out of the show too! The 'meanwhile back in Baltor's room' thing was a nice touch too. ;)
person eltf177
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, please keep them coming!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A sex story about Baltor, he is so hot!
person Shaellin
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you know I'm lovin' it! Icy/Darcy is one of my absolute favorite Winx pairings! =) The fact that you're sticking with the original Italian version in which they are actual sisters just makes it even hotter! It was a real pleasure to beta this story for you and I eagerly await the next installment. ^_^
person eltf177
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. Looking forward to what Icy's got planned...
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thx :D I appreciate it :) I hope to get at least one chapter up before the end of the weekend. Next week is a very busy week at work :( So I'd barely be able to write :( (And I have three chaps in my head dying to get out)
person Shaellin
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No need for that. I just copied the story right off of here and I'll email it to you directly when I'm done fixing it up. I have a few questions I'll need to ask you but I'l email you about those.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Personally, I get the feeling that it would take a little more than that to get Stormy going. I've always felt that Stormy has trust issues, especially when it comes to something as intimate as sex" - Funny, I've always felt the same about her here XD

But I didn't feel like food play at this time :p so I ditched the bowl. Maybe on his next visit? ;)

I'd like it if you were to correct my story :) should I upload it in the group then or how are we going to do this?

And thx for the comments :)
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe Episode 12 was surely one of my faves XD

Those three fighting for beeing noticed. She might not be my fave of the three, but I really loved Darcy in this one ;) I died when I saw Darcy's expression when Stormy went to 'Try out her new powers' and Icy 'Had to do something'

And it also killed me when Darcy said they were fighting over a guy when Icy responded 'Yuck! You're right'

XD Anyway expect the next chap soon ;) I don't kno yet how soon but still...

Greets