rate_review Reviews

You have mental problems guy 

Wow, that's an intense and dark tale, no doubt about it. I think you may even give me some nightmares, but I can't fault anyone for exploring their own dark side. The writing is good and definitely effective at revealing the horror, though it's a stark manner that expresses Bart's nonchalant attitude as he destroys his little sister. That bare detailing is also good when describing how he murdered the twins, like it was barely worth mentioning, and then it made a good (well...) callback as he nestled himself up in Lisa's remains.

I also wonder if he's thinking about how Maggie's life will be destroyed too when she's not only alone in the world but has to live in terror that her brother may come for her one day too. Creepy! Then I do have to ask: is something about Lisa that you really don't like, even if only in some little way, that made the story easier to write?

One typo: "the gratefully died" (but I'm surprised I could notice. ;))

You were right to warn me. Compared to this, the story I was hesitant to post seems like cuddling a kitten.

holy fuck! this is one of the most disturbing stories iv ever read! ever! you have a warped imagination lol but seriously you have guts for writing this so i applaud you ^-^

That was sick, depraved and disgusting. And i enjoyed every line.

LoL that was very funny, i cant think of any single person on the the world that had an orgasm with a brain hahahaha, reserve somethin for marge, and maybe maggie too, spread all fuckin organs of lisa in the house

This is the best Bart/Lisa story I've ever read--I've been hoping to find something like this for a long time!