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for Music of the Tides

by Christopher

person Shaellin
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'm working on a MusaxLayla story myself, so I found this story quite interesting. One thing I found distracting is that you never said when the girls actually laid down on the bed. I was picturing all this happening with the two girls standing up the whole time, right up until you had Musa crawl over Layla, which told me they must be laying down. I was like "Layla is fucking Musa with her toes while standing on one foot? That takes talent!" LOL!