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for Mindy's Revenge

by JayDee

person Anonymous
schedule July 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Mindy is psychotic 

person Anonymous
schedule July 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Mindy deserved to get her brain mulched by the lead slug

schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah, wow. I have to give it to you, your flair for the over-the-top dramatics is awesome! It actually made what should have been a terrifying scene incredibly humorous! I am definitely completely out of the loop on what the hell is going on with Homer and these crazy broads, but I don't care! The reading is definitely entertaining even if you don't know what's going on. I specially liked the reason for it all, it's definitely in keeping with your stabs of humour throughout the fic. The closing line was so cheesy it actually had me chuckling as I clicked to review. And the puns! The painfully hilarious puns, oh my. Very entertaining read, as I've come to expect from you.
person pittwitch
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a different interpretation of the Yule celebration, lol. Expected no less from you, though. Good thing I never did like the Simpsons ... thanks for sharing, JayDee. Really!
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mindy's Revenge: The Holiday Special:

Yikes! Even without reading the previous chapters it's pretty clear to figure out what happened to Marge. As for Lurleen and her friends, it's too bad that they all had to be sober when meeting their violent and untimely end. The pure viciousness of the attack is shocking, but for a quick torture-murder fic. very effective.

For some reason the thought of sad Homer listening to Lurleen's records over and over again was very sad.
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nothing like a good fixation on an unsuspecting guy, huh? (At least I think Homer's clueless...) This probably is why I've always avoided Yule Log cakes.

Seriously, well done!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story but the ending should have been more... karmatic. like Mindy NOT dying but instead being charged with what she did and given the electric chair OR tortured over a course of many years by an angry group of people consisting of the friends/family/loved ones of the deceased until she dies horribly... and that's my opinion
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"It felt so good she just kept on balling away in the corpse’s butt." Great line. If this story had a theatrical poster, that would be the tag-line.

I also really enjoyed the utter indignity of Manjula's final moments. Nice work!
person Big Bad Rubber Ducky
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
screw lurleen anon do ruth powers instead she's a better canidate since she's single and lives next door 2 the simpsons speakin of ruth when will you update bart the ripper?
Later
BBRD
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Meg, but i do not think it would be Maude... why? because
when the line "taken to fucking the squishee lady" came into context it
was clear these events are occuring AFTER the episode "The Sweetest Apu"
which was aired after the episode "Alone-Again-Natrua-Diddily"

will it be Lurleen?
will Mindy ever get her comeuppance?
and these gory simpsons stories rock!

PLZ update soon!
signed,
Anonomyous (not so good at spelling that :P)

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