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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy seeing updates for your lovely work. Well its nice to see Katara showing off her balls and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. Sweet, naive Aang. Only if he knew all about Zuko and Katara's hot sexings.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HURRAAAAAAAY FOR CHOICES!!!! -dances- Excellent work- keep it up! -applause-
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! write more, write more please please please...I was so excited to see you put up another chappie, i love this fic, can't wait to read more
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the romp goes on, so to speak... Okay, not to sound fussy or anything, cause god knows I like raunchy sex scenes as much as the next pervert, but I'm thinking it's time to get back to plot for just a while. Just saying. Laters.
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The evocative imagery in this chapter makes me wish I could draw & colour this entire addition! *^_^*
Spleef, this was gorgeous!
Spleef, this was gorgeous!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a freaking HAWT love scene, two thumbs way up. This line was my freaking favorite 'and take him until he was screaming her name like it was the only word he knew' BEST LINE EVER!
I liked the history of the firelilies and it was cute and funny about how everything is 'fire' in the fire nation. I adore the 'what if they see us' line, that totally cracked me up.
I'm so happy to be reading your wonderful works thank you so much for writting so well and so often.
I liked the history of the firelilies and it was cute and funny about how everything is 'fire' in the fire nation. I adore the 'what if they see us' line, that totally cracked me up.
I'm so happy to be reading your wonderful works thank you so much for writting so well and so often.
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yayz! New chapter!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how Hakoda is going to react to his daughter's choice. Althought I do feel bad for Bato. He's a good man and he is gonna be heart-broken.
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Note me on DA if you wish to reply.
Anyways, very nice. I liked it a lot, can't wait until you update. So, update soon and keep your readers happy. All of your readers. Though, personally, since Avatar is an Asain themed show, Zuko should be drinkign saki opposed to wine, but then again, the myth that this story is based off of is a Greek myth and they drank wine in Ancient Greece opposed to saki. Hmm....personally, I don't think Zuko should be drinking anything achololic and any age. But, hey, a tispy Zuko is funny. I once did a chapter of him drunk as a shunk in my Zutara fic, Walk My Love. It was pretty fun, though personally, I think I butchered it and could've made him a more convincing drunk, he was just acting like he was high on something opposed to drunk.
Damn it! I'm babbling and you propably don't even want to here this nonsense. Though, I will tell you a juicy little um...plot detail for Freezing Lightning. In the next chapter, when Suki does the rebellion. Katara catches Zuko with one of his concubines, in bed, naked, having sex.
Why? Because when Katara's a concubine, there is some tension between her and a few others, Zuko's past favorites. There are four total. Sakura, Ume, Hana and Naoki. Of the four, Naoki is the most aggressive.
Ooh, if you are looking for a good book, just for enjoyment, you should try reading Touched By Venom. Its kinda...graphic, okay its not that graphic, though they do use the word penis and sexual taboos are littered throughout the story. Its a really good story, though if my mom found out I was reading it when I bought it, I think she would be kinda irked that I was reading something like this and she would have to read it to make sure its okay. My mom lets me read anything a pretty much want, she doesn't believe in cenorship. Oh, speaking of cenorship, Little Red Riding Hood is one of the books on the Banded List. I don't know why, but I find that stupid. Next you'll have Humpty Dumpty banded because of its reference to suicide, and the Lord of the Rings will be banded because its insulting to "little people" or the "hieght challenged". What is our world coming to? And people banning Huckelberry Fin and Tom Sawyer, because it uses the N-word in it, WTF? Get real people! Its a period book! They talked like that back then, you shouldn't make such a big deal about it.
^^; I didn't mean to ramble. Honestly, I didn't. Really. OneRepublic is really good. Anyways, thanks for the amazing chapter. I really should become a member, just for the author alter feature. But then again, I have this story on author alert on Fanfiction.net so when you update that sight, I know you update it here. Gawd! DJ! Stop rambling!
I know you, like many Zutarains are upset with how the series ended shipping wise or just the crappiness of the ending as a whole. So, my ending question to you is: If you met Mike and Bryan what would you do say to them? (Within legal reason? No killing them with rusty spoons, pencils or sporks, despite how fun it is to gouge out their eyeballs and suck their brains out through their ears with a straw.)
Anyways, very nice. I liked it a lot, can't wait until you update. So, update soon and keep your readers happy. All of your readers. Though, personally, since Avatar is an Asain themed show, Zuko should be drinkign saki opposed to wine, but then again, the myth that this story is based off of is a Greek myth and they drank wine in Ancient Greece opposed to saki. Hmm....personally, I don't think Zuko should be drinking anything achololic and any age. But, hey, a tispy Zuko is funny. I once did a chapter of him drunk as a shunk in my Zutara fic, Walk My Love. It was pretty fun, though personally, I think I butchered it and could've made him a more convincing drunk, he was just acting like he was high on something opposed to drunk.
Damn it! I'm babbling and you propably don't even want to here this nonsense. Though, I will tell you a juicy little um...plot detail for Freezing Lightning. In the next chapter, when Suki does the rebellion. Katara catches Zuko with one of his concubines, in bed, naked, having sex.
Why? Because when Katara's a concubine, there is some tension between her and a few others, Zuko's past favorites. There are four total. Sakura, Ume, Hana and Naoki. Of the four, Naoki is the most aggressive.
Ooh, if you are looking for a good book, just for enjoyment, you should try reading Touched By Venom. Its kinda...graphic, okay its not that graphic, though they do use the word penis and sexual taboos are littered throughout the story. Its a really good story, though if my mom found out I was reading it when I bought it, I think she would be kinda irked that I was reading something like this and she would have to read it to make sure its okay. My mom lets me read anything a pretty much want, she doesn't believe in cenorship. Oh, speaking of cenorship, Little Red Riding Hood is one of the books on the Banded List. I don't know why, but I find that stupid. Next you'll have Humpty Dumpty banded because of its reference to suicide, and the Lord of the Rings will be banded because its insulting to "little people" or the "hieght challenged". What is our world coming to? And people banning Huckelberry Fin and Tom Sawyer, because it uses the N-word in it, WTF? Get real people! Its a period book! They talked like that back then, you shouldn't make such a big deal about it.
^^; I didn't mean to ramble. Honestly, I didn't. Really. OneRepublic is really good. Anyways, thanks for the amazing chapter. I really should become a member, just for the author alter feature. But then again, I have this story on author alert on Fanfiction.net so when you update that sight, I know you update it here. Gawd! DJ! Stop rambling!
I know you, like many Zutarains are upset with how the series ended shipping wise or just the crappiness of the ending as a whole. So, my ending question to you is: If you met Mike and Bryan what would you do say to them? (Within legal reason? No killing them with rusty spoons, pencils or sporks, despite how fun it is to gouge out their eyeballs and suck their brains out through their ears with a straw.)