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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was pretty fun. I definitely got what you were doing, with the italicized fable and the more detailed corresponding novel, and it was enjoyable. I regret that Sokka has not had a bigger part in this plot, but I definitely love all of Zuko's close-ups.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Touching and relieving chapter. Glad to see the tension of the clans has disappated.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was kinda wishing Zuko would have giving Katara's dad the beat around but I guess its best they leave on civil terms...Or do they lol.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww so sweet. I'm glad that cooler heads prevaled and that Hakoda wasn't an ass. This is such a sweet story. Only now that Zuko gets to have an awesome dragon form what is Katara's ultimate form. A giant sea lyviathin, like a dinasour, would rock.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least her father has let go, that's something. I guess next chapter is like an epilogue or something? Well, until then. Laters.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh... the hardest thing a father has to go through... giving his daughter away. good for you hakoda you took like a man. so... are we going to see any babies?
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful as always, and just what I needed after a really REALLY crappy day. Thank you!
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I'm so happy to see that they can be together openly! In your face, Aang!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay Katara better this time stand up for Zuko, she has no more excuses and if she doesn't tell her dad that she loves Zuko and wants to stay with him, then she is totally lame because Zuko has given her everything and he deserves her loyalty!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I loved Hakoda's entrance in this chapter! (And I think he really acted the way a father would, to calm the situation to make sure his child wouldn't get hurt in the cross-fire.)
Thank you so much for updating, Spleef!!! ^_^
Thank you so much for updating, Spleef!!! ^_^