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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you did add the little closing Legend to tie up loose ends and conclude a happily ever after! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. You write this pairing so beautifully in so many ways. This was a lovely new take on the best couple in Avatar. You should feel very proud of yourself! I love the way you write. You know, of course, that my favorite part of this chapter was the dance of Tui and La. Sexy culture is the best.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how can I not love this... one question is this the last chapter?
How can I not say DAMM that one lucky god. I got to say while reading this my spine tingles and I feel the character. I could really feel Zukos uneazyness and as soon as he started to warm up during the hunt I started to relax. I smiled, I smirked and a litlary laughed out loud at this. It is a loveing tale that all should read.
How can I not say DAMM that one lucky god. I got to say while reading this my spine tingles and I feel the character. I could really feel Zukos uneazyness and as soon as he started to warm up during the hunt I started to relax. I smiled, I smirked and a litlary laughed out loud at this. It is a loveing tale that all should read.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending, I approve. And this is obviously most definitely the end, I mean what else is there to say after that? Well, It's been a long, wonderful ride, and I was glad to partake of it. Until the next fic, then, I suppose. Laters.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it would had been funny if zuko melted the castle of course it would have been an embarassment for everyone else. beautiful story i enjoyed greatly.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing story spleef! I'm sad to see it go, this is one of my absolute favorites, but what a great way to end it and keep true to the story of hades and persephone and to the characters of avatar, while keeping your own style ^-^. I like how Katara has a choice in the matter of going back and forth as she please (I don't honestly think she would have had it any other way; she would whoop Zuko's sorry butt if he didn't ^^;). Exquisite ^-^ I can't wait to see what you come up with next in your original compositions. <3
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow the end!? beautiful story!!
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah, this is an ass kicking story. I love it. Good work! ^.^
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how sweet and fuzzy. Um, is that the end? cause the finish was a little tiny bit abrupt. Well, either way, wonderful send up, and a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you! Laters.
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice to know aang finally accepted the fact that katara loves zuko... i ALMOST feel sorry 4 him. nice to know hakoda starting to be more welcoming to his son-in-law. it this the last chapter or will there one more? maybe w/ a baby?
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww very sweet and tender. I liked the dragon play, it reminds me of a 'Spirited Away' fanfic I enjoyed.