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luvin it so far. long feng is a jackass. probably gonna demand katara as his concubine or something. zuko and her dad will probably kcik his ass. great job, hope to see more.

Woot woot! My favorite scene is back up. Thank you, CultofFuckawesomeness!!!!! :D

Very nicely done and very hot, please continue.

Well i can honestly say i like this interpretation of Zuko more than your others ones. He is much sweeter and gentler with katara in this story and doesn't lose his temper when she makes valid points against his possessiveness, and while he did still kidnap her he was mostly motivated by loneliness and the though that he would never get a chance with her otherwise he at least doesn't take away all of her freedom and is holding himself back and trying to win her over. Please continue

More kick-ass additions. :D I hope you keep the scene where they play cat-and-mouse in the water and debate 'surrender' vs. 'losing.' That was hot and entertaining lol. By the way, in my last review I forgot to mention how much I like the new title. 'Siren' sounds better than 'maiden' simply because that's what she is to Zuko: irresistible. Just from the build-up in the beginning of both incarnations of this story, there's just something about her that makes their union inevitable. I feel the title fits better than the last. Awesome job on that and on this chapter.

woo! I'm so excited to read a new story from you! I love Zutara and I think its great that you chose this story because I just named my daughter Persephone lol this is a new spin on a great story. I can't wait to see what Hakoda does when he finds out where she is. Is this going to be a longer story?

I decided to reread one of my favorite stories, and what do I find? It's being revamped! Awesomeness! I'm sure you will make it even better like you did with your other fanfiction. I especially liked the haiku scene. Lol using erotic poetry? Zuko is such a devious bastard! I hope we see even more heated conflict and arguments in this version than in the last one. It makes the passion that much more enjoyable. Anyways, I already like this version more than the last and it's only five chapters in. But nothing you've posted here has ever disappointed me (and I've been reading your stuff since the first SitL in Jackie Chan Adventures). Thank you for pimping my favorite of your fics. I can't wait to see what's next!!!!! :)

I love this story, I really enjoyed reading it the first time and look forward to reading it again.

Loved it!!! I was hoping that it would continue. It really does resemble Darkness Becomes Her only replacing the characters with the cartoon I love. I wish that in the anime Katara and Zuko would have ended up together. All in all, I love your stories and can't wait for the next one. =D

This was an amazing story and I loved it all the way through. ^_^