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;_; Poor Zuko-baby. Hopefully no one will discover where Katara hid her robe...hmmm. Is she still wearing the rainbow jewel? I can't recall...
Good chapter! :)

I love the story. Really I do! But there's one problem I found. You said the story's based off the rape of Perspheone, right? Persphone was Demeter's/Cere's daughter, not Amphriedes's/Posiden's daughter. I'm pretty sure you knew that already though and just wanted to have it work with the story. Supposedly the story is that Persphone was frolicking in the flowers one day when Hades tempted her to see the flower's that grew in the hero's field in his domain. She was hesitant, but after much persisting, she followed him. Long story short, he raped her, she became the queen of the underworld. Demeter went looking for her daughter and while she did, she neglected her duties to keep watch over the fields. Demeter found out what happpened, went to Zeus about it, and he said Persphone could return to the surface as long as she hadn't eaten any food from the underworld. At that time she hadn't. But Demeter went to the underworld to get her, not knowing that Hades had given her some figs to eat should she get hungry on the long trip up. About halfway up, they stopped for a rest and Persphone (much to Demeter's dismay) ate one of the figs, effectively transporting her back to Hades. Now, based on an agreement made by Zeus, Demeter, and Hades, Persphone's allowed on the surface six months out of the year (spring and summer) and the other six she spends in the underworld with Hades (fall and winter). That's basically the story the way I remember reading it. Anyhow, this one sound's more like the beginning of the story of Eros and Psyche. Read that one, it's really good! Anyhow, keep up with the writing, I'm really enjoying it.

aaaawwe! That was sad!!! Poor Zuko! I hope it turns out ok for the poor guy! I dont think that I have ever hated Aang before, but I hate Aang right now! lol, please update soon!

Wonderfully logical arguments. I find "court" proceedings difficult to write, but this one was done very well. I look forward to the next chapter.

OH MY GOSH!!! you have to write another chapter as soon as possible or else i might die of anticipation!!!pleassssse update soon!!!!!!

Phenomenal as always!!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!:)

Gaaaaagh!! Sad! Clifhanger too!
Toph is teh awsomeness! Telling off those silly man-creatures for forgetting the person who would be mainly effected by this whole mess!
Can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

An amazing chapter, I'm just sitting in awe and wanting to see what happens next.

Girl needs to learn to stand up for herself, though I suppose I can't blame her. Loved Toph, so very much in character. Liked the "trial" in full, really. Obviously we have one or two more chapters before we're done here, and I look forward to them! Laters!

I freakin' love this story!!!! Very addicting,update soon!!!:)