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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome... is it almost gonna finish i hope not keep up the great work and update soon
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Noo! Please tell me you're going to write more! I'm hooked; your story flowed so smoothly it was like I was actually reading an epic and you went into such detail with your characters!
I need more!
I need more!
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I realy do enjoy this fanfiction.I canot wait for the next chapter. the character devlepoment in this story is truly amazing. how you see Kataras haterid for Zukko turn into a need for him. everyone else and how thaey afect the stroy: Iro and his words of wisdom. Angs rage and even the wise Tophs out look on the hole situaction. I canont wait for the next chapter. I always have been and will be waiting on every word of this stroy. please dont stop making this masterpice. If you do you are dipriving the world of one of its greatest treasures. (I am sorry for spelling and gramar mistakes)This is one of the things that keep me going through my day.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutley love your story but I`m not really liking Katara right now...I mean I know she`s confused but she was pretty much silent through the whole proceedings, I mean she could have at least thrown a bone at Zuko..poor guy he looked devastated.
``The Water Goddess paused by a tree, and leaned against it as she stared out at the sky, feeling the crisp air on her face. If Toph was here, she didn’t know whether she should thank or curse the blind goddess. Part of her was relieved that she could choose by herself. But, oh! What a difficult choice it would be – it would be easier if it had been decided for her.`` Yeah I know it would be easier for her but she has to stop being spoiled and stand up for herself and the least she could have done was tell Aang to mind his own business! LOL.
oh what if Katara is pregnant...that would be an interesting twist.
I love this story and I can`t wait until you update!!
``The Water Goddess paused by a tree, and leaned against it as she stared out at the sky, feeling the crisp air on her face. If Toph was here, she didn’t know whether she should thank or curse the blind goddess. Part of her was relieved that she could choose by herself. But, oh! What a difficult choice it would be – it would be easier if it had been decided for her.`` Yeah I know it would be easier for her but she has to stop being spoiled and stand up for herself and the least she could have done was tell Aang to mind his own business! LOL.
oh what if Katara is pregnant...that would be an interesting twist.
I love this story and I can`t wait until you update!!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"He wanted to make love to her in every position and reduce her to a pile of thoroughly-sexed Water Maiden mush." Best. Line. Ever.
Wonderful as usual Spleef. It amazes me because everytime i try to review one of your wonderful stories, I can't seem to put the right words together to express just how wonderful and brilliant both you and they are. So then I feel like a noob. I truly wish there were more writers with the talent you posses. It's almost painful reading some of the trash that's in the fanfic world today. I don't need to tell you you are doing a great job with this story because everything you write is golden. I look foward to more updates!
also on a side note just wondering how you got into reading and writing fanfiction. Oh and one more thing, are they any other types of Fanfics that you enjoy reading? other than Avatar of course. Are there any that you enjoy, but haven't gotten a chance to put your own spin on?
Wonderful as usual Spleef. It amazes me because everytime i try to review one of your wonderful stories, I can't seem to put the right words together to express just how wonderful and brilliant both you and they are. So then I feel like a noob. I truly wish there were more writers with the talent you posses. It's almost painful reading some of the trash that's in the fanfic world today. I don't need to tell you you are doing a great job with this story because everything you write is golden. I look foward to more updates!
also on a side note just wondering how you got into reading and writing fanfiction. Oh and one more thing, are they any other types of Fanfics that you enjoy reading? other than Avatar of course. Are there any that you enjoy, but haven't gotten a chance to put your own spin on?
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story. you have such nice art and stories. iv read cold fire and hot water. they both rocked. i cant help but wonder, is this story complete because the ending seems kinda sad!!
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just, wow. You've not only kept the personalities from the show alive, but you've created a whole new world AND rewrote one of the oldest legends in history! Kudos to you! Can't wait to see how if it turns out like the Hades and Persephone story, or if you have something up your sleeve.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwee!!! I almost cried at the end of that chapter! Poor Zuko!!! I am going to be checking this daily for a new update! You are amazing!
And just because I have to say this, AVATAR MARATHON ON THE 22nd!!!
And just because I have to say this, AVATAR MARATHON ON THE 22nd!!!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least now we know where Azula is, and good riddance! Ahh, angst, we know thee well. Somehow I think I sense a Water Goddess running away act in the near future. I happily await number 13! By the way, in the chapter list, you have 11 marked as "IX" which is "9", when I think you wanted it to be "XI". Just thought I'd let you know if hadn't noticed it yet. Laters!