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Lol I knew we hadn't seen the last of Long Feng. Can't wait to see how this plays out! Great chapter. :)

I love this story, thank you for posting it and sorry I really haven't been reviewing as much as I should. I look forward to the next chapter.

They are TOGETHER!!! Wow, I did not see that coming...I thought she was going to escape on Bato's watch. It is hard for me to imagine her as a Siren - especially through the water. I don't know why. But the power Zuko held over her...that scene was enthralling.
Mmm, I sense a lot of drama and intensity is about to be stirred up! I like this change of pace. Katara's situation was frustrating for her.
So many possibilities of what could happen next...Thanks for keeping us on our toes! I hope you update soon! :)

Ahhh, you can't just stop there!! I liked Katara's confrontation and how you portrayed her longing and desperation. Can Zuko see her on the beach through his telescope? Wonder what he would have thought of another man touching her like that...
Through your writing, I feel frustrated as I want to break Katara free. Good build-up.

Oh my!...Please, I need more T.T
Hope you won't take long to give us another chapter. I guess I've read 4 fic's of yours during the last week, but this is my favorit one.
Forgive any mistake. English is not my mothern language.
Brasilian Greetings

I have LOVED reading this story so far. Your writing has improved by leaps and bounds. Zuko's personality in your stories reminds me of Scorpio men. Do you have Scorpio in you? Your originality in your stories is inviting and your characters are magnetic. I can picture everything in my mind vividly, and sometimes I feel shy and blushing when you describe how Zuko is with Katara. I'm glad you're showing a different side in this story by giving Katara control over her future. This makes the situation more realistic, but I felt SO bad for Zuko when she leaves him. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you never stop writing Zutara like this, because you have a gift!! :D

The haiku collection was a clever idea.

Oh Aang... He's just incapable of seeing what's right in front of him lol. I like the addition of the sewing scene. It adds more foreshadowing to the Zutara-Aang confrontation later, as well as the snitching scene. Good chapter, can't wait for the next! :)

Lol Poor Zuko is having a really lousy day... But he has to realize that as good as his intentions were, he did kidnap Katara against her will and keep her from her family. There are no escaping the consequences of that. That's actually why this is my favorite of your stories. He does go with the whole "caveman" approach to winning her over, but eventually he has to accept that he can't force her to be with him. He has to allow her to make the choice to re-enter their union on equal terms later. I actually like Slow Heat as well because they started out as equals. I like the trilogy and Kiss of Fire, too, but in those stories Katara never really got the chance to make the choice for herself. She realizes it's where she wants to be and accepts it, but I think Zuko would probably have more luck getting what he wants if his approach was different (as he learns in this story). I'm definitely liking the slight changes more, they definitely enhance the original plot. I know you'll only make it better from here. :D

Uh oh... Methinks Long Feng will be more of a villain in this version. Can't wait to see what he's up to. Though there was conflict with him in the last version, there wasn't really a real bad guy in it. I'm sensing that's about to change lol. Great chapters, and thank you for updating so quick. :)