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Okay, still more to tell. So Mai and Ty Lee are Nymphs/Dryads/Naiads/etc., huh? Okay. Poor Mai, though, Zuko really was overly harsh. On the other hand, go ladies, way to smack Long Feng a good one! Yeah, I liked that. Hehhehheh. Well, looking forward to the next installment when your done with it. Laters.

Yay for updates! i really liked this chapter and the Long Feng/Katara interaction. Hope things turn out well for Z & K in the next chapter!

I'm so happy you added another chapter! I can't wait for another one. I wish Zuko and Katara could meet in secret but judging how the Maidens are always hovering over Katara that would be nearly impossible.

What a marvelous chapter! I loved this so much, the scene with Bato and Katara was very sweet. Hope to see more!

Yeah!!! An update!! I love this story, and was so happy to see the next chappie up. Please update again soon, I can't wait to read how the Water Tribe reactes to her true feelings...

i loved the new chapter can't wait till you update again

long feng u bastard. katara loves zuko... y cant she just tell her father that? the storm in her wont settle until she admits it because her heart belongs 2 zuko just like his heart belongs 2 her. hakoda open yuor eyes n realize that zuko was never like his father n dont think about considering bato as a possible suitor 4 katara.

"Bato helped to pull Katara off of the slick Earth God, who had been subject to a first-class ass-whipping from the irate woman." ^_^ *giggles*
Oooh, somehow I get the feeling that Long Feng's strategy has backfired in more than one way. His words *could* just drive katara to go see Zuko...
Yay for updating! :D

Spleef this is my first time reviewing any of your works but, let me say that I am a hugee, I mean HUGE fan of your work man. Seriously my brother you have a gift for storytelling & writing. I know you may feel a little bum that not many people have been writing reviews or leaving behind a few comments, but don't let that discourage you man from writing such great fics especially Zutara. I know you may also feel a litte under aprreciated but writing & storytelling should be and I blieve is your passion. I know you love comments, replies, & reviews. But you should your fics & story no matter what, because its what your excited about and passionate about. You should write your fics for yourself first & for the fans of your fics and the shows your base them on second. I mean no disrespect by what I write thats just my opinion & take on you stituation.

With that said here is my review on this chapter of Capture of the Maiden. Dog let me tell you when I saw Mai's name as the first word in this chapter and reading further into this chapter I was saying to myself "What the MAIKO shipping invading Zutuara NOOOOOO!!!!". Seriously I have nothin personal against Mai & Zuko being together it just is your fics have really turned me into a true blue & red Zutara fan man. That is how loyal I am to the fanbase. But you know after these new Avatar episode and seeing their relationship. "DAMN" was all I could say because those two look like they really, dare I say love each other and look almost like they belong together man. From the first time they kiss, all the way to the beach episode I said "DAMN" because its making a MAIKO fan, and I am starting to question my loyality to ZUTARA.

Anyway Zuko wasn't interested in her so that renewed my faith that Zuko & Katara could still hook up together. But damn I know Zuko pining for Katara but, he didn't Mai that bad, especially considering how Mai has true feelings for Zuko and really cares about him & how she was willing to comfort Zuko, you know probably more than just in the bed. Did Zuko ever consider Mai's feelings? Or even if she had any? So I feel a little bad about the way she got treated.

And now for Hakoda. I can understand the role of a father and everything. Not wanting to see his little girl hurt or taken advantage of but man dat nigga is too over protective.

As for Long Feng, excuse my french but dat nigga is a mother fucking bitch ass nigga for what he was trying to do to Katara. I was pissed the whole time I read that part of the story. When I was reading dat I was afraid, I was afraid dat when the Dai Li showed up Katara was gonna snatched up by Long Feng and taken to Ba Sing Se. And den all hell would break loose Hakoda would mad & Zuko would probably be so pissed he'd burn Ba Sing Se to the ground. But thankfully Katara kicked Long Feng's little monkey ass.

Spleef this was a great chapter man continue to produce smash hit after smash hit man.

But I do have some questions and concerns after reading dis chapter. The whole thing with Bato desiring Katara, I know there is nothing between them, but my greatest fear is Hakoda. What if Hakoda gives Katara hand in marriage to Bato just to keep home, safe, & stuff. I mean I know Bato is considered their "uncle" but really ain't no blood between dem. What if Hakoda does that? How will Zuko and Katara react to such actions?

Mind you all of this is speculation, I have no intention for this to be story possibilities. But I you decide to create a chapter or anything from these speculations I would feel honored that my comment/review contributed to such a great sorry like Capture of the Maiden.

Also I being going back to old chapters and other fics you wrote to add my two cents on them.

Until next time continue to write for the fun of it man. Don't discourage yourself and don't let other discourage you, even if I am one of them.

Peace

I am loving this! I've been reading it, and I just can't get enough. The imagery is excellent and how you are using the myth is pure genius! Update soon, as well as your other fics, I enjoy them all!

~Lady~