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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEeee I love how you intragrate the past characters. The Hama story with her face being young but her hair being white was great. And I adore what you've done with Jun, she is such a yummy woman. Awww I feel bad for sad Zuko, such a sweetie. I like the latter interpration of the Hades/Persopheny myth very nice.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God I hope Katara actually does something this time. I was surprised that she wasn't alarmed when she heard her father say "He will." Hakoda replied with ice-cold certainty, "If this goes on much longer, I will do something. Katara need never know of any of this." Clearly he means to do something drastic.
I love Zuko in your story. He is so sweet.
Great story! Please update soon.
I love Zuko in your story. He is so sweet.
Great story! Please update soon.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeahness!!!! An update! It has been forever... I love this story so much. I was almost afraid u had writers block 4 a while... I love the way this story is progressing. Its kinda mad me sad reading it lately... mainly since they were split apart of course! And poor Zuko... all alone in his big bed at night. But now I cant wait to see what katara is gonna say to her dad lol. I now it hasnt been that long but now i must end my review as I do with all stories that I love..... Please UPDATE SOON!!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like the lioness has finally found her claws! This is going to be interesting, oh yes. And I liked how you worked Hama into this, too, nice inclusions. She is a little off her rocker, isn't she? Though I notice in this tale she kept the Bloodbending to herself. I'm not quite sure if that's a pity or not... Well, until chapter 16. Laters!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice !
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally she is going to do something, god I am so pissed at Katara, she is letting her family decide her life and when she found out about the letters she should have stormed in on her father. It is annoying having them seperated for so long, Katara can have kids right? Well then knock her up, her dad will throw her at Zuko.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter as usual! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is a nasty place to leave off D: I think you did a very good chapter, again! I hope that you update this and other stories soon for I think that you are a great author and I love to read your work!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and look forward to each new chapter!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SPLEEF! You can't leave it there! You must update immediately! NOW! Finally Katara is about to get her own back! I can't wait! Great use of language and the myth. Can't wait for more!