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for Losing It

by HundredEye

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schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and good, and the last line was the best.
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very sweet and poetic adult story about an event that's meant to mean a lot to people. You did another good job with this one too, especially capturing the whole innocence and intimacy of the whole act. Nice one.