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Take his body as in...possess as his own...or dominating it?...
I hope there's another chapter coming!
I wonder...will other ghost enter this? Like Skulker, Vlad, etc.
What about his friends? Are they no longer his friends and no longer care about Danny?

omg, u whore!!!! how could u stop there? *strangles u*
UPDATE SOON DAMMIT!
um, pleze? :P

i must say, this one of the best danny phantom fanfic's iv ever read. I have enjoyed reading your version of the happenings of the show, alot then watching the actual show. Im starting to realize that in your fanfic Danny doesn't have any ghost powers, or does he? Im interested in this little detail.
Im eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this fanfic.

I honestly truly love this story to start with. It's dark, realistic, and emotional. You've made Phantom into an anti-hero and it scares me...in a good way. I'm worried about what would happen next though. From experience, when a love interest turns psycho in fanfiction, the main character basically just gives in and 'end of story'. It would be interesting to see if Danny would struggle against Phantom's now 'dark and abusive' nature and maybe even try to reform him. Like, help Phantom understand human nature as the poor guy doesn't seem to get the indirect scarring he's committing against Danny such as killing his parents and his indifferent nature for human life. Revenge is sweet, but going too far makes you a murderer without the excuse of a vendetta.
Of course, I'm anticipating anything you dish out, just constructive thinking on my part. I'm looking out for little Danny after all. I don't want to see Phantom's negative influence strip him of his feelings and rational thoughts and into an empty shell at Phantom's disposal.
Keep up the good work!

I hopoe you update soon! ^_^