rate_review Reviews

Happy birthday, Archer!

I think that I read this 3-4 years ago. Good job.

This was a very fun read, thanks for writing it.

I loved the story but you've got to work on your words as you made put words that are not the right one word like "waste" should have been "waist"
anothe one example of wrong spellig is in this sentence if that shows whatI mean
"He had removed his seat belt and was "kneelling" on the chair. All she could see was from his mid-back down" kneeling is the word
or in the same paragraph "That helicopter up (their),"there" doesn't belong too...

A spell checker would think it's spelled right, as it is a word, but like that one word not what it should have been mean.

I did like the story and hope to find out what those blue marks are on his back and who was traing him and what's with Ron being kind of short as Ron a tall young man and there are near gown up adn pleae continue and make sure the right word is there and space the paragraphs into something less bunched together and you've got a super story well worth reading!

You would have received a 4* but please for the love of Pete, GET A BETA!!!!

Give it up for the Ron Man!

Looking foreward to updates.
Going on my best-read list too.

I love the poetry you show between them in Chap 2. Keep it up!