rate_review Reviews

Nice writing, but I feel like this story should have a sequel. Of course, it'd be more plot based, but it would be dirty nonetheless.

now i just have too see where this is gonna go

I found it one of the most sweet plotlines I ever read...too bad for the ending tho XP I was wondering if we could chat some and Im also into writing some myself and well...I was thinking of a project we could maybe to together with some of my other friends ^^ how about it?

Oh yeah I almost forgot, I also got a couple OCs myself and I could maybe show sometime too I guess if you want if you have MSN or AIM that we could chat to. =P (my contact info is on my userpage if you want to know, thanks)

This is frankly one of the best lemon iv read in a very long time, congrat's on the great work.
Like you pointed out yourself there were a few mistakes and errors, but you made the effort to correct them; I would say thats all one could ask for. The injeted comic points ect. were great and I felt the ending was spot on. Nicely done all round.
p.s. super work with Lilo

Its all cool Experiment447, relax. Anyways, pretty good story *this is anon btw*, sadly woulda wished for a better ending instead of them having to be shut down (although i AM happy its not a completely bad ending). But keep it up corncob, try going for some stories with relatively good/happy endings. =)

Not bad, not bad at all. One small note though: Yaarp is the one who makes sonic blasts from his horn, Holio is the one who makes black holes.

How interesting, Stitch, Reuban and a few others start an experiment porno industry. Never would have thought of that, certainly odd, but undoubtedly humorous! (I find the rampant bisexuality particularly funny). XD

Keep up the good work, I'm anxious to read more. Oh and I must correct you and Experiment447, Elastico is actually a male, looking into the etymology of his name says it; being a Spanish one (and thus a romance language which has both masculine and feminine words/names) he would have been named Elastica. However, this is your fan fic, so you're free to do with it what you want, I don't really have a problem with it, it's just I can be anal retentive at times. Anyway, Update soon!

As long as this doesn't end like Bonnie's Challenge (got worried when Lilo was brought into the picture), I'm all for this story. Keep it up, I like your work.

I like it alot please continue it.