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well im new to this site. i just came across it ans your story was the first one i read and it was great.. please finish. you have a great writing ability i dont read that much but i thought your story was great. i hope you get published cuz your are just as good or better than most writers out there. you keep the person into the story and wanting more... good luck

WOW

You had me hooked from the getgo. Thank you so much for writing and I hope to see more soon.

woow.. i ain't a zutarian but after this.. woow your good
hope you keep updating it cause yeah your sooo good in it LOL
i have been reading this story non-stop ><

When will you update again? I miss seeing this story updated it is one of my favorite avatar stories. Please update soon, I know you were kicked out of your parents house and that school is coming up again, but I really hope you update soon.

Wow, this is a good story!! I can really feel how much work you have put into creating this story. You keep them very well in characters!

I look forward to when aang and sokka sees zuko and iroh, how they are going to react and when they find out about katara and zuko.

Keep writing!

Read up to chapter 15 on FF.net and I'll keep checking for both sites just so I don't miss out on anything. ;) I'll be looking out for future chapters. ^^ May your Muse inspire you! =)

Okay, I have now read all fourteen chapters, and I must say you write very well! It'll be intersting to see where you go from here, and I do hope Toph rejoining the gang is in store. However, do you realize that a solar eclipse wouldn't cover the whole planet? In fact it would really only cover a small area, and only the centermost couple of square miles would be in total darkness, the rest would only get a partial eclipse. And then there's the little fact that they only last about half an hour to forty minutes, tops! All in all, it's actually no where near as good a window of opportunity as the kids seem to think it is...

WHOA i read this story out in one go, its beautifully written! The way Zuko and Katara grow closer, the way you describe all of it interlaced with hot sparks of passion...................I love this story! There is to be more chapters rite? Could you let me know when you update please? My email is Justjen@live.nl Thanks!!

great as always. and they deleted that sweet love scene on FF. idiots...sigh MORE PLEASE!!!