errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read upto Chap 3.
Now THAT ois one seriouslly Dark Ron.
Booyahahaha Motherfuckers!
The possible family is going to be in the BAD place. I hope Rom fucks Anne and makes Kim watch then tortures them after Kim confessess. I reckon anne could be Ron's pet abd Bonnie as well as Shego his comffort sources. sorta like 2 face....
From the movie Leather(Shego) Lace(Bonnie) both loving Ron.
Now THAT ois one seriouslly Dark Ron.
Booyahahaha Motherfuckers!
The possible family is going to be in the BAD place. I hope Rom fucks Anne and makes Kim watch then tortures them after Kim confessess. I reckon anne could be Ron's pet abd Bonnie as well as Shego his comffort sources. sorta like 2 face....
From the movie Leather(Shego) Lace(Bonnie) both loving Ron.
schedule
December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sick. Dark. And unapologetic.
More!
More!
schedule
December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really don't like ron & bonnie killing. But like the sex parts of kim&bonnie chapters.
schedule
December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope to read more soon
schedule
December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a seriously messsed up fic, that's so deep i can't stop reading it. good job.
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn nice fic, pls tell me that he is not death, he survive somehow and then he will go rampage to all fucking middleton
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are one screwed up motherfucker!! Damn, I like. Too fucked up to be real or even slightly fictional but who gives a damn. Ill read the next chapter when i feel the need to hate the world. Right now I just don't give a fuck.
Till next time....adios.
Till next time....adios.
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jesus H Christ...you are in need of some serious help.
Ron definitely went off the deep end. Cop killing with his hands and feet. Kidnapping. Forcing Bonnie to become a killer. All because of Kim's inability to tell the truth. It was not the first time than lying got Kim in trouble (First Season #21 - Halloween). But this time the consequences go up exponentally.
Great dialogue. An enemy of my enemy is my friend until proven otherwise...I have to remember that line.
Great dark fiction...Keep it up.
Ron definitely went off the deep end. Cop killing with his hands and feet. Kidnapping. Forcing Bonnie to become a killer. All because of Kim's inability to tell the truth. It was not the first time than lying got Kim in trouble (First Season #21 - Halloween). But this time the consequences go up exponentally.
Great dialogue. An enemy of my enemy is my friend until proven otherwise...I have to remember that line.
Great dark fiction...Keep it up.
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeesh, i didn't mean like this, but well written anyway! GOD! i mean like holy crap man this is some DARK shit! Don't forget Shego and Kim's mom!
GO RON!
GO RON!
schedule
December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting would like to see more of this story