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for Our Masks

by ladylaguna

person Anda
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He agreed to go to Dib's house! Has he forgotten about the making of the smeets so quickly? Chapter 6 has smut you say? YES!!!
person Anda
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me... Dib gave her the freakin' keys to his house, right? DAMN! DX Though the answer to Zim's question should be pretty obvious Xp Dib said he could lie his way out of trouble with his girlfriend. I wonder if his boast is still valid in this situation XD UPDATE SOONISH! *clings*
person Noise Pollution
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh SNAP, YO! It's the girlfriend! Run, guys!

Wow, man, this was awesome. Seriously, the depth of the characters here is incredible, and very entertaining. All of their little mannerisms and whatnot, using characteristics from the show and complicating them. Building up characters, yo. I live for that shit. Not to mention the smut was actually very heartwarming.

Aw no, I'm gonna get addicted to this fic too, aren't I? Aaagh, I put too much on my plate.

Can't wait to read more! (I am so glad xmas break is coming up. I'll actually have the time.)
person Skittles The Sugar Fairy
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cackles evilly* Nice twist. I liked the whole slack jawed bit. And Zim is so ashamed but -wanting- I LOVE it. I can't wait to see what Dib will do with the girl-friend matter. Poor girl, though had it been me I woulda been slack-jawed for a whole 'nother reason. Cause damn that was hot. >> Lol, keep it up!
person lea
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like how you characterize them in this. great, keep going!
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drools* I love you!!!! I can't wait to read more. I saw that you updated and I about screamed from, joy!!! I wishi was half the writer you are, but my ZADR stuff is crap.
person Skittles The Sugar Fairy
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, tis good. Tis very very good. I do so love de way dat Zim is just so traumatizeed by everyone wanting 'im. De way dat Dib is so unsure of what he wants. Zim's curiousity it piqued and I can't wait to see where exactly this will go. I also can't wait to find out why Zim is the way he is being and what exactly happeneed. Lol. Sorry about the beginning, twas watching PotC2. ^^ Please keep up the excellent work. I love your style of writing.
person anonymoose
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, fast update! i like where this is going.. very much. hott.
person Andalitebandit-6
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's Zim isn't it? The alabaster boy... IT HAS TO BE! No one else can pull off feminine masculinity like Zim can! XD Doesn't put out, huh? Saving himself for Dib, is he? WAAAHHH! What a thrilling chapter! *loves all over it and goes off to read next one*
person Andalite
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HE KNOWS! *dances* He knows and he's going to catch him! EEEEE!