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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was... Well I felt so bad for Zuko. I can't wait for the next chapter to be put up.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG FINALLY!!! I was starting to feel deprived. Anyhoo, still lovin your work. You have few typos but nothing a once over wont cure. Love how u keep the characters actually in character as well. Lovin it chica, keep up the good work an update soon.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue soooooooo want to read more i really cant wait for you to update ^_^
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very very nice I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the masturbation! And the fued is cute, both boys want each other, but they can't admit it *grins* I can't wait for more ^_^
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaa please uuuppppdddddaaattteeee!!!!!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS IS SO FUCKGIN AWSOME. I never in my life thought I would find something so good. I love how you kept the characters IN character and I love a harsh yet shy and inexperienced Zuko with our loveable sakka. ITS SO GREAT!!! And the little foreplay scene in Ch.2 is just absolute genious. I love it, please you have GOT to update A.S.A.P. im begging you here. please update soon and keep up the excellent work.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice!! i like how you managed to get some good smut in there while still making it believable. i love the concept of sokka getting burned and zuko having to help him. and the fact that they only did hand jobs to each other was smart too. going all the way is unbelievable in this circumstance. i liked how sokka was just a 16 year old boy with hormones, and zuko's interal thoughts were good too, cuz it didn't make him seem as he was just falling head over heels in lust with sokka.
the end....eeii!! what's gonna happen?!?!
can't wait for another long chapter! &^^^__^^^
the end....eeii!! what's gonna happen?!?!
can't wait for another long chapter! &^^^__^^^
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... Imagian if the next episode of Avatar was actually like that..... I would be so happy. and its a good story. I enjoy it. update soon with the yaoiness please.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this promises to be very very intresting!! xD cant wait for more!