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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excelent, a very beutiful peice. Next chapter should involve Aieta/Yumi, but have it be a one-night-stand deal and have Yumi go back to Ulrich. The Sissi/Milly thing is a breath of fresh air in stale pairings. Make this good.
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's cute!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story. Waiting patiently on updates. On a side note, THE DUMBASS LITTLE SHIT FOR BRAINS NO TALENT WRITER IS GONE. YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thankyou, that will be all Genkins.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, This was very good, it has quite a plot behind it but You might try adding more, I don't know passion or sex into it. It does need something yet even though it doesn't have it that much I was still trapped into the reading. Also please note that Jeremy is spelt with a Y not an IE. Just so you know. but other than that it was great!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it, your next story should be a aelita/yumi.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Please continue it. Put a little more romance in though(hint, hint). Otherwise it's a great story.